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The WORST Scene from Every Star Wars Movie (Writing Advice)

Posted on January 6, 2025January 6, 2025 by cotyschwabe
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TL;DR: In this post, we explore the worst scenes from each Star Wars movie, from the original trilogy to the Disney sequels. Each scene is critiqued for its impact on the story, character development, and overall movie experience.

A New Hope

The first film in the Star Wars saga, *A New Hope*, has a moment that stands out as the worst scene: the Metal Ceremony. This scene occurs at the end of the movie, right after Luke Skywalker successfully destroys the Death Star and returns to celebrate with the Rebel Alliance.

While the act of celebrating is commendable, the Metal Ceremony feels completely unnecessary. It clashes with the spirit of the Rebellion, which has been portrayed throughout the trilogy as a gritty underdog fighting against overwhelming odds. The idea of rebels pausing to dress up and hand out medals seems misplaced and trivializes their struggle. Instead of ending on a high note, the movie adds a scene that doesn’t contribute to character development or plot progression, leaving viewers feeling that it detracts from the film’s overall impact.

The Empire Strikes Back

Moving on to *The Empire Strikes Back*, selecting the worst scene is more challenging, given the film’s high quality. However, I would argue that the scene where Leia kisses Luke is the weakest link. Leia’s dialogue in this scene is cringe-worthy; lines like “I don’t know where you get your delusions, laser brain” feel forced and unnatural.

Moreover, the kiss itself raises eyebrows given the later revelation that they are siblings. Even if they weren’t related, Leia’s character—strong, independent, and proud—would likely not resort to kissing someone to make a point. This moment feels out of character, undermining the development and strength of Leia’s character throughout the film.

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Return of the Jedi

In *Return of the Jedi*, we encounter the Ewoks, and the floating chair scene stands out as the most problematic. Initially, the Ewoks are hostile towards the main characters, but once C-3PO appears, they instantly recognize him as a god. This setup could have been interesting, but shortly after, when Luke and Han are about to be executed by the Ewoks, C-3PO pleads for their release, and they ignore him despite their supposed reverence for him.

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This forced conflict feels contrived, and while Luke eventually saves the day, the scene is ultimately a waste of time. It detracts from the film’s pacing and adds little value to the story.

The Prequels

Starting with *The Phantom Menace*, there are many contenders for the worst scene, but I would argue that Anakin blowing up the droid control ship takes the cake. Anakin, portrayed as a young prodigy, lucks his way into victory by hitting random buttons and accidentally triggering the autopilot.

This scene undermines the stakes of the battle and makes Anakin’s success feel undeserved. At this point in the story, we expect characters to make meaningful choices and sacrifices, not rely on sheer luck. This lack of agency makes Anakin feel more like a nuisance than an inspiring hero.

In *Attack of the Clones*, the worst scene has to be the fireplace dialogue between Anakin and Padmé. Anakin delivers some of the most cringe-worthy lines imaginable, and Padmé’s response is equally lackluster as she fails to challenge his awkwardness. This exchange does not showcase genuine chemistry or character depth; instead, it feels forced and incredibly unrealistic.

Lastly, in *Revenge of the Sith*, Anakin’s sudden transition to Sith Lord stands out as the most jarring moment. After Mace Windu’s death, Anakin goes from horrified to calmly agreeing to serve Palpatine in a matter of seconds. This rushed emotional transition strips away the significance of Anakin’s character arc and dilutes the impact of his fall to the dark side.

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The Clone Wars

In *The Clone Wars*, a film that bridges the gap between Episodes II and III, the worst moment occurs when Anakin and his padawan find a hologram doctor who cures Jabba the Hutt’s son with a magical pill. This lazy writing is an example of how the plot relies on absurd coincidences instead of character-driven storytelling. The scene feels like a cheap way to resolve the tension and makes the characters appear foolish rather than resourceful.

The Disney Era

Kicking off the Disney era with *The Force Awakens*, the worst scene comes when Finn captures Captain Phasma. As the stakes rise, Finn’s attempt at trash-talking Phasma feels out of place and undermines the tension. This moment of comic relief disrupts the narrative flow, making it hard to take the characters seriously during a life-or-death situation.

In *Rogue One*, the introduction of Jyn Erso fails to engage the audience. Instead of showcasing her character’s strengths and motivations, the audience is subjected to a lifeless info dump. A strong character introduction is crucial; Jyn’s uninspired entry makes her seem bland and forgettable, which is not the impression you want to make with your lead character.

*The Last Jedi* presents a buffet of poor scenes, but the one that stands out is when Rose saves Finn from sacrificing himself. The buildup to Finn’s decision feels powerful, but the abrupt intervention turns a meaningful moment into a farcical rescue. The film squanders the emotional weight of sacrifice, leaving viewers feeling cheated and frustrated.

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In *Solo*, Han’s coincidental reunion with Kira detracts from the story’s believability. The sheer number of coincidences—Kira being at the same event, knowing Beckett, and working for the same crime syndicate—makes the plot feel contrived. A more compelling narrative would have had Han actively seeking Kira, adding depth to their reunion.

Finally, in *The Rise of Skywalker*, the worst scene is undoubtedly the moment when Poe exclaims, “Somehow, Palpatine returned.” This line epitomizes the film’s lazy writing, undermining the entire original trilogy while introducing a villain without proper buildup. The execution of Palpatine’s return feels rushed and uninspired, leaving audiences wondering how the creative team failed to build a coherent and satisfying narrative.

Conclusion

From the original trilogy to the Disney sequels, each Star Wars film has its fair share of missteps. While the franchise has given us iconic moments and beloved characters, these worst scenes remind us that not every choice in storytelling leads to success. What do you think is the worst scene in Star Wars? Let us know in the comments below!

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